Gacked from legionseagle 

Pick any story I've written, or, in the case of my longer, chaptered works, any chapter from any story I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you the equivalent of a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you’d expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

My stories are on these sites:

https://www.tthfanfic.org/authors.php?no=178&list=published   (includes several multi-author round robins)

http://archiveofourown.org/users/MarcusRowland/works
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