January 12th, 2005

marcus 2013

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I got a couple of rather negative reviews for my last drabble at the Pit of Voles (AKA Fanfiction.net):
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Okay, the first is possibly a valid point, apart from the crap spelling, the second is just fan-wank. So I've posted another chapter just for ff.net
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Am I being too harsh?