To recap, for those who haven't been paying attention the last few months, FFX is based on the novel Tooth and Claw by Jo Walton, a Victorian-style story of life, love, lawsuits, cannibalism and other fun stuff... in which all of the characters are dragons. So far what I've written is 30-odd pages of background material and a 50-odd page rewrite of the game rules to accommodate dragon player characters. Eventually there'll be adventures, and it will all be on line as a free download.
For now what I need is people to read through, try out the setting, and generally play with the modified system and dragon characters, see if it all seems to make sense. Some feedback would be nice, the only condition is that you mustn't give copies away or make it available on line - this isn't the finished game, and there may be lots of changes before I release it.
If anyone's interested comment below, agreeing to the no copying condition - I'll send you a personal message explaining how to download the PDF, which is currently around 4.5mb